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Which Halloween story should be featured?

Harry Potter & the Monster Under the Bed by Snapegirl

36%

A Time to Live by little-sun

Hug a Sad Little Boy by little-sun

28%

The Legend of Sleepy...Hogwarts? by Zarathustra

It's Following Me by wellyuthink

26%

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Snapegirl
Nov 19, 2008 04:16 pm
Thanks, kreacher, I was curious as to how it ended. :)
kreacher
Nov 19, 2008 09:49 am
snapegirl my review ended something like this, it was longer but i don't want to spoil the story, if i was in snapes posistion i wouldn't know how i would tell my loved one the devastating new
Attackfish
Nov 19, 2008 01:43 am
and I actually have a holiday one shot this year!
Missy Eye
Nov 19, 2008 01:33 am
Happy early X-Mass!!! New Harry Potter TRAILER OUT!!! It's intense! It's quite awesome, just look it up one youtube!! :D
slytherensangel26
Nov 18, 2008 10:46 pm
twilight is an awesome and addictive book. i fell in love with edward and yes i am on pins and needles for the movie to come out!
starangel2106
Nov 18, 2008 09:33 pm
characters
starangel2106
Nov 18, 2008 09:33 pm
good. lol. i'm sorry you don't like the book. but i wasn't trying to debate on anything. i just asked if anyone was excited for the movie considering it does have Robert as one of the main
Attackfish
Nov 18, 2008 09:06 pm
starangel12106: I am writing a novel!
starangel2106
Nov 18, 2008 09:01 pm
most isn't how the book is though, but still cool. hehe :D
starangel2106
Nov 18, 2008 09:01 pm
most isn't how the book is though, but still cool. hehe :D

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