ummm....i suppose this was a good story just not believable from harry's point of view. you have completely dismissed the effects of torture and it's lasting repercussions. no torture victim is ever going to "respect" their torturer especially when they go to great lengths to recreate the scene. betrayal by both snape and dumbledore would be the very least of his feelings. being forced to thank and be cared for by one's torturer in a prison cell is just ludicrous.
why in the world is snape keeping harry in a prison cell and where is poppy as dumbles promised?
Very powerful piece - wow!
another excellant chapter. hope the fever breaks soon
this story is wonderful so far! must read more!
Wow. That'd make for bit of awkwardness. >.- "Oh, yeah... I tortured Potter at the Dark Lords behest last summer."
Brilliantly done, this. I really enjoyed it! ^^ Nicely writ.
OOooh... I think I like this twist. Very nice. Well, not for the characters, but I trust you know what I mean.
Yeah... probably a good thing Snape's not a healer. His bedside manner sucks. LOL
Harry is not having a good summer. At all.
... I must wonder why it is that Snape has Harry locked in a little cell. I mean, he's not known for his kindness, but still.
Hm. Guess I'll just keep reading.
Aww... poor guy! That is just awful. And the description of that potion makes me wanna gag. >.< Gross.
Aw... poor Harry. At least the Weasleys made it known right away that the poor kid needs help. Still, I rather expect things to get at least somewhat worse before they get better.
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