Wow, that was really good. I love how Snape was feeling such malice towards Harry at the beginning and then moves to guilt by the end. The imagery of the shiny needles gleaming in the light was very vivid too--a scene I won't forget for a while, I assure you. Very nice work!
Well I had to come and read this... So I can go and read your recent story. Anyway, this was so good. I loved all the mentions of Dumbledore and his lemon treats. I especially liked the ending, where Snape said he was sorry. Oh it was so cute!
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