| Title: Prologue
| 15 Apr 2010 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Dd (Anonymous)
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i know this is mean by just useing this but when you register your account it dosent say were to put your password so im not sure what mine is can you tell me what im suposed to use?
| Title: Harry and Snape Talk to Remus
| 01 May 2008 11:01 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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good fic, i'm absolutely loving it and can't wait to read more about harry and snapes relationship as father and son
OH MAN! So good, so good! Please keep writing! It's great!
I love how Snape is so in character, how you keep the tension up. I really like that you let him HELP Harry in Occlumency, instead of making all mean and nasty. ;)
Harry is great, somehow very young, but at the same time very old...yeah.
I love Moony and Padfoot, their bantering is hilarious!
Keep up the good work, you're great!
| Title: Harry and Snape Talk to Remus
| 03 Oct 2007 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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I think your logic is flawed. Harry, the enemy of LV could not be in any greater danger from the student DE no matter who his father is, however Snape of course would have to choose. However by coming out he could try to swing all those students away from LV without the song and dance. Granted, the Light would loose a spy but why does no one consider Harry's mental health in the up coming battle? Personally at times I think Harry should just tell the wizarding world to stuff it and walk away.
Loved it and can't wait for more this is going great. Want you to update sooner wah.... I love this story to death. So update soon..er.
-Potions
| Title: Harry and Snape Talk to Remus
| 30 Sep 2007 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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virtual hugs for the update
| Title: Harry and Snape Talk to Remus
| 30 Sep 2007 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed)
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I love everyone in this chapter! Severus and Harry are just confused males with their emotions running wild and Remus was the perfect balance between the two.
I guess I never thought Remus' character would work like that, but it does! You did an awesome job!
I hope Harry gets back to the Tower eventhough he's not wearing his glamor charm...did he think to grab his cloak before rushing out of Snape's room? If not, it would certainly be interesting if he was caught by Filch wandering the halls after curfew. *snickers lightly to self*
I can't wait to see what Severus' next move is. Does he say "screw Voldie, I want to have a family" and show Harry how he really feels or does he say that Harry can wait. IF he does decide that it's better to be safe than sorry and not be 100% fatherly towards Harry, it would be interesting if Voldermort somehow found out anyway...and decided to remove Severus from his services (however he decides to do that). Other stories I've seen take a diferent route than that too, though. They (somehow) get Voldie to believe in Severus' claims that if he befriends Harry that it will help in some grand scheme of things that will result in the capture of the Boy when he leasts expects it, some long time down the road; obviously allowing Snape to be plesent in Potions towards Harry and all Gryffindors.
Well, whatever happens, I can't wait!! Update soon please!
This was heartbreaking. Thanks to wise Remus, both Harry and Severus understand each other better, yet they are just as trapped by circumstances. It rather makes it worse. Wonderful, insightful writing---now fix things! LOL!
I look forward to the next chapter!
Arwen
What a shock for Snape that must have been! I'm surprised that he reacted so calmly, but perhaps we'll get Harry's POV and see what was going on in his eyes, underneith his defences?
Really good chapter, I really did like how Snape's train of thought led him to a "everything has its purpose." Hopefully he's able to work out a way to be Harry's dad while maintaining his cover as spy for Voldermort and Dumbledore. Or if he can't, that he explains it to Harry better so that he understands that it's not him (Harry) but rather Snape's own limits that are preventing them from being a family.
Maybe something will happen over the Winter Hols? Perhaps a little family reunion between Father and Son?
Can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon!
This was a powerful chapter. You depicted the pain that Snape is in exceedingly well, as well as the earlier chapters showed Harry's pain. I hope there is some resolution for both of them soon and that Snape doesn't have to stay on the path he's been on for so long. Dumbledore is great for telling Snape to do something, such as reach out to Harry, without giving any means for achieving it in light of his other demands on the man. It was also great to see Harry take the plunge...I just really hope it works for him and there is some positive result from this for both of them.
Arwen
Poor Harry keeps getting denied by Snape. I wonder if he ran off to the Astronomy Tower again. Hope you can update again soon!
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