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Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 08 Jun 2013 3:30 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This has been a wonderful story! I can't wait for more!

    I noticed you have a translator for another story posted on this site....... Any way that person can translate a few more chapters of this???? **begs!!**

    Author's Response: thank you! I'm afraid this is not the same translator, with All The Way we are two person translating: I translate French to Frenglish, and Dash11 translate Frenglish to English :-)
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 18 May 2013 3:43 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent story, please update soon
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 01 May 2013 8:20 pm
Reviewer: SimplyFox (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay wow I adore this story I just spent the last three days of my life devoted to binge reading the entire thing.
    BUT ALAS!
    As soon as I caught up moments ago I went to check when it was last updated....
    2010....
    A noise not human escaped from the very depths of my soul as I cried out in anguish over yet another probably never to be finished fic.
    This literally happened a minute ago I am very sad.
    I am almost tempted to try and learn french but I already need to learn German and Japanese so I doubt it will happen any time soon.
    If you do ever happen to update I assure you I will come running to read this outstanding and wonderfully written/translated story.
    It is by far the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever read.
    Thank you for existing and I hope to read from you before this story fades off into the abyss of time.

    Author's Response:

    ahhh yes, orship me, worship me ;-)

    Thank you vey much for your review! Don't worry: the story is still going in French, and my translator is still working on it too! Unfortunately, my poor Raewhit had a lot of health issues, but I think that if I finally manage to finish my story in French (it's not a problem of motivation but a pb of too much imagination, I appear to have the 3rd longest fanfic of the French fandom), I will try to translate myself. It certainly won't be any good, but it will be something!

    See you soon! 

Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 13 Apr 2013 2:45 am
Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OK - I was almost fired from my job.... because I spent all week reading this AMAZINGLY AWESOME story!!! Totally wonderful in any language!! Then it stops!???? I hope there is more - I may have to surf every other fanfiction website to hunt for more more more!

    Please return to the Harry Potter world and continue this saga!!!

    Author's Response:

    ow, I'm sorry, I promise there is more! My translator is still working on it, there will surely be at least a new chapter someday, and there is a lot more in French ;-)

    Thank you for reading! 

Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 08 Jan 2012 4:55 am
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so wonderful! I love the way you write Harry and Snape, and so many of the other wonderful characters in your very unique plot. I just commented on your livejournal, but I'm looking forward to reading more when you manage to find a translator! I wish I knew french so I could read more, but, alas, although I adored the country when I went there last year on vacation, I was absolutely pathetic when it came to trying to speak it (I tried, though!). Thank you for sharing your time and your wonderful talents!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! My translator is still working on it, so there is hope :-)

    Hey, next time you come to France, come to Brittany, I'll be your guide ;-) 

Title: Chapter 48: Control 24 Nov 2011 1:23 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Hee! Absolutely adored Shadow's encounter with Titus! Just goes to show that not all feline behavior is pure instinct-- some has to be learned! (I could just SEE Shadow rudely sticking his nose into Titus' fur to smell him!!!) And who is the "other" black cat? Possibly Millicent Bulstrode's? (I suppose Harry never took notice of Hermione's scent when she was a cat-woman...) // Also, amazing details regarding Harry's training session. And he killed a boggart-- I didn't expect that! Hmm... Now I'm wondering if that foreshadows someone else's demise. We shall see... Terrific chapter, Keina!
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 30 May 2011 12:30 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Please, please, please tell me that conversation between Ginny and Dean completely ruins any chance of Harry and Ginny getting together (I can beg, if you want me to. That red head [And I'm not being biased, my hair is auburn!] should not be anywhere near Harry!) Anywho, that was a harsh conversation. I wonder how much Harry will fall victim to it, we all know he likes to people please.

    So at this point in time you haven't shattered Harry's faith in Severus, (which was the reason I feared reading this chapter! I must be more wary of reading your responses to other people's comments. *laughs*) so I'm content. I wanted more Sev and Harry, but the last bit made me smile. So any chance of Harry fighting with his housemates about Sev? Especially Ginny for that comment about it being a mistake? Please, pretty please?

    So I've been meaning to ask, in an earlier chapter, there is a a panther I believe in Harry's dreams protecting him. Is that who I think it is? Will Sev ever get his magic completely back? (Maybe by the threefold rule, for every action good or bad, you are paid back threefold? I can't help it, I had to try for Sev!)

    Please write more, I love this story and cannot wait to see what you continue to do with it!

    Author's Response:

    Ahah, many question, at can at least answer one because it won't be a big spoiler: Ginny is not my idea of Harry's perfect match either!

    Raewhit is still working on the translation so hopefully there will be another chapter someday ;-) 

Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 19 Apr 2011 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed) [Report This]
    From ch 50...

    "Could you send Kreacher to hang me? I'd like to talk with him." -Regulus

    My gods, if the man wasn't dead and a painting... xD Sirius-ly too funny. =)

    HAH! A 36-year-old grandfather! Lolz, congratz Remi.

    Hee? What happened to Remi & Sev going drinkin'?

    Ah, I hope Draco's still... intact.

    Hmm... if Harry gets to meet Sirius, James & Lily at somepoint...

    He could ask Sirius what in the name of Merlin he's supposed to do with the house?

    Where is Lily's wand... Does Sev have it?

    And James... well... =)

    Is Remi gonna be an alcoholic?

    I absolutely loved Regulus... *sigh* I can't wait for more of this... Your ability to write the characters... *drools, green with envy*

    *... tracks & favs the story, + favs Keina...*

    Author's Response: thank you very much! I hope I will be able to answer your questions sometime soon, my translator is still working on it!!
Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2 28 Feb 2011 2:57 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved your use of Loki in this scene! I can't imagine a more nerve-wracking experience for everyone during Lupin's interview. And when the howl ended in a laugh... I was howling with laughter at the very idea! Fantastic!!! // Overall, this chapter is amazingly constructed, with each segment comprising its own mini-story. I really DESPISE the social worker, and it was great to see each person (especially Ron!) neatly side-stepping her attempts to trap them into supporting her distrust of the adoption. Harry and Severus were almost through with the ordeal when Lucius showed up-- NOW WHAT??! Also, it's obvious that Loki has listened to the entire proceedings, and I'm really curious as to how he will use the information. You've created a series of neat twists in this chapter-- wow! Way to go!!!
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 08 Jan 2011 3:26 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it took me a while, but I've finally caught back up :D

    I'm really glad too, I missed reading this wonderful story. I feel bad for Remus right now.... But that sweet scene at the end got me smiling again :)

    Great chapter, can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: thank you, hopefully there will be more chapters in the future ;-)
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 30 Dec 2010 12:13 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter as always thank you
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 24 Dec 2010 1:19 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I love this story, and Shadow is a mischevious kitty! Albeit, a cute and sweet kitty.

    I don't trust Loki as far as I could throw him.

    I'm worried; what on earth is he planning. Great chappie Keina. and can't wait for the next.

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