Nice crapilogue. Ten cauldroncakes for the title :)
Aw, this story is great. Pretty fast too, which is a nice contrast to majority of fics on P&S
I like the way you picture the adults
Snape and Lupin working together? Yes!
Such a sad way for this story to end. Not that I think that Sirius and Remus didn't do well in raising him, it just that I wish Severus had done what his heart actually told him to do and fought to have custody of Harry himself.
| Title: Crapilogue
| 17 Apr 2010 12:17 pm
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| Reviewer: prolixly (Anonymous)
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Beautiful story. I adore how it is from Harry's point of view, and the last line really links every thing together. Nice work.
-prolixly
Good story, brilliantly written, however not easy to read, heavy stuff...
Very interesting how you told this, from little Harrys perspective with some POV of Severus and Remus and Sirius at the end. Horrifying how manipulative, cold and callous Dumbledore was to play with Harry´s health and life in this way, that he did not care about how bad the child was abused (in your world Mrs Figg did make reports to the OOP about him).
Dumbledore knew of the switch of secret keepers and despite that let Sirius rot in Askaban. How cruel. That is the great infalliable Lights leader?
This is something I have believed too after reading the books, how could he not know or at least doubt that Sirius would betray his best friend?
You let the reader really feel their disbelief and shock when Severus and Lupin discover the abused child, scary how more and more of what little Harry suffered comes to light.
I suffered with Harry, Severus and Remus reading this.
It felt suffocating at times.
Thank you for the Epilogue, it gives a perspective of at least some hope.
Only so very sad that Harry does not recognize Severus and does not know that and how he saved him, but I understand it is necessary in this world so Severus´cover as a spy stays intact.
| Title: Crapilogue
| 07 Jan 2010 12:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely I liked little Harry's POV about the two, wonderful story thank you
very very VERY well done, that. Absolutely love it; though in my mushy mushy heart Sev would have just run with Harry as soon as he saw him, but then I just hate to see Sev left out ^^
Very nicely written though, I love your Lupin ^^
| Title: Crapilogue
| 07 Aug 2009 4:59 am
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| Reviewer: Mariya (Anonymous)
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Aww...this was very sweet. I knew there was a good reason why Snape is my favorite character.
| Title: Crapilogue
| 25 Jun 2009 6:35 am
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| Reviewer: dragongirlg (Anonymous)
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Wow! I love this story! Your three-year-old Harry, and the effects of the abuse on him, are really well-described and perfectly characterized. I'm very, very impressed and the minimalist writing/tone is also perfect.
This is so brilliantly written! When I saw it was only 4 chapters long, I just thought "it's either not finished or has a really bad, rushed ending" but to make it any longer would ruin it. I love this story and when Lupin is getting more and more upset over Harry it just breaks my heart! I'm off to find other stories by you ^_^
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