| Title: Chapter 8
| 23 Apr 2013 9:31 am
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| Reviewer: Maddie (Anonymous)
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I think this story is quite amazing. i want Snape to find out about the voice....
Hi there! Even if it's a while you don't update this I was wondering if you will ever go on with this story. I really wish to see what happen next!
I'm very interested in this story and would love to see the rest. You've got me waiting for that fight with "The Snape" and Harry. We could all do with some sharp bitter retorts being thrown around :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it thus far. Its going to almost be a year since I've updated it, but I'm really really close to finishing the next chapter, I just havent gotten around to finishing it- yes, blah blah excuses, but truthfully it will be updated soon :) -Welsh
That's what I was waiting to see, all the anger, the frustration! What's with Hermione and Ginny? Where's the feminine tact? tsk tsk. I can't wait to see how Harry and Sev get along
~~Estie~~
Author's Response: I have a tendency to make a few boring characters a little OOC, like Hermione and Ginny. Well, Ginny mostly.... Thanks for your review :)
Nope, he's not crazy :)
I love the voice, whoever it is. It fits perfectly with this story so far. It's intriguing...
~~Estie~~
Author's Response: Lol, thanks. I'm glad you like the voice. I do too, though Grib was a far more fun character to make :) Thanks for the review! -Welsh
| Title: Chapter 3
| 29 Jan 2009 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Anonymous)
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“I’m not crazy,” Harry told himself as well as the voice.
“No, you are not crazy,” the voice in his head replied."
LOL!
Author's Response: thanks for the review. that line was supposed to be sort of comical, actually. -welsh
Loved the chapter and I thought Severus's comments about the library were very Snape-like, especially the part about breaking Harry's neck. I liked the walking stick bit, though I'm afraid of bugs, so I'd have probably run through the wall trying to get away. That's one of the reasons I moved from Florida, too many gross big bugs! Ugh! I crushed a scorpion once on my kitchen floor, a tiny one, but still! Don't have that kind of thing in NJ.
Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: thanks, im glad i did severus' character right. it was a little hard.
Yeah, lucky you that you can move, I'm just an unimportant minor, and will have to remain one for a few more years *frowns. But once I go to college, I'm out of hot, gross, sticky, fat Texas!!!(and away from the bugs that inhabit it) And I agree, the one time I went to Florida, it was quite scary... especially the south... plegh, there were so many bugs. NJ is a lot better.
Congrats for finishing Heir! I havent got around to reading it, but will soon because I love that genre with Draco, Harry and Snape. Thanks for your review!
sigh. gross idea of a fight w/ snape.
Author's Response: really? i sort of liked it, but hopefully for you i might not use it in the end. im not sure yet... thanks for the review
Nice chapter, but watch your use of accepted versus excepted. In the beginning you used excepted twice when it should have been accepted. But other than that, I enjoyed the chapter and hope for more.
Author's Response: thanks, and thanks for pointing that out, i am horrible with those kinds of things!
Yay an update
another great chapter
Author's Response: lol, thanks again, ILoveMoony
Lol i love crazy!harry :)
Author's Response: hehe, me too. thanks for the review.
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