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Reviews For The Heir to Prince Manor
~Shade Author's Response: Thanks1 Glad you're enjoying it!
I LOVED the mud fight! I'm so glad one of the boys decided to laugh before Sev went out there, or he'd have made a major arse of himself lol. I love Harry's daring! I would totally have thrown the mud too! In fact, I have hahahaha! Love love looovvveee it! One of my favorite chapters definitely! Author's Response: Thanks1 The next chapter will let you learn more about Sarai and who she is besides just Severus' teacher. I liked the mud fight too as it gave Sev a chance to let his hair down and just play with his boys. I think he needs that every now and again. Harry wouldn't be Severus' son if he didn't dare to do that. Happy reading!
It's awesome that Hedwig and Storm Rider had babies! How adorable! I want one! Sev's reaction was great. He did not lie to Harry for the sake of Harry's feelings and tell him he wasn't disapointed by the grades, but he didn't yell at him and make him feel two inches tall. I'm glad he made Harry understand his expectations, but that if he didn't meet those expectations, he would still hold a special place in Sev's heart. I'm also glad he didn't really get punished. Just told to read the book, which he would have been told to do even if Sev said he wouldn't punish him. And writing the essay, simple. *tosses roses and chocolate chip cookies* well done!
This story is so making me want to go Shimmerling hunting until I find one ^_^ It would be too epic to have a Shimmerling take up residence in my home! I like how Harry once again, initiated contact with Sev and hugged him. Sev needed that. He doesn't know it yet, but it seems that he is doing what Harry was doing to himself. He feels bad about betraying Lily to the Dark Lord, and he won't allow himself to be loved. He thinks he deserves to be treated wrong. Poor Sev. I'm so glad that he, Harry and Draco are becoming such a tight knit family. I was so excited to see Draco and Petunia come up with the other faces of people that loved Harry! I was like yayyyyyy *does a jig*!!!! lol I'm so glad Draco and Harry are getting alone!!! I'm not a Draco lover (or liker, for that matter), but in stories like this, the little brat grows on me! lol XD Great chapter! Can't wait to see the Vernon dementor, he seems worse than ol' moldy Voldy to me!
And omg Draco...seriously!? LOL him and this sleeping! Author's Response: Yes, Draco's attitude with his sleeping is taken directly from a nephew of mine, who loved to sleep, and could sleep ALL day, till 2'oclock in the afternoon! And sometimes it was because he stayed up late, but other times it was because he just liked to sleep, LOL! I recently read in a medical journal that the reason teens love to sleep is because they are usually growing during those years and need extra sleep than they did as children. If you love Smidgen, you'll love the next chapters.
Great chapter! I want a Shimmerling : ( The only complaint I have is about the punishment. It seems so freegin long. It's been almost a month since his punishment started and he and Draco have been behaving and doing their chores, they should be let off for good behavior : ( Once a child is punished for a certain amount of time, they start to forget what they are being punished for. Oi! See thissss is why i've been trying not to comment on stories...tsktsk lol. I get all super involved in the story like it's real life. That just means you're an epic writer who is bringing out my compassioin and other emotions...like my spidey senses *tingle tingle* lol...i'm so weird. haha! So glad I can click "next" and don't have to wait on these cliffhangers weeeeeeeeee!!! XD Author's Response: It does, but remember, they've only been under punishment for around 2 weeks, and they did bring it upon themselves. Severus is being somewhat lenient by allowing the boys to use their IOU's to mitigate their sentence. Yes, they are learning how to get along, but then that is the whole purpose of this punishment. They are also learning useful life lessons, like consequences for actions, how to appreciate how easy magic makes things, like laundry ( I wish I had magic to clean my house after a hard day at work!), and how to use different ingredients in potions and brew more advanced drafs than on their syllabus at school, plus how to cook. Trust me, Draco and Harry know exactly why they're being punished, Sev reminds them every day. As for letting them off, Sev can't do that, he has to be consistent. Although there may come a time when he considers it due to someone's influence. I won't mention any more about it now, you'll see what I mean later. Yeah, it's good not to have to wait, I agree. |
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