Amazing, you have lots of imagination.
Very original. I like it!
I did find a few mistakes, though. You switched to third person in one sentence and a few grammar and spelling mistakes as well. Other than that, it was brilliant.
Wow...I would love an explanation for this...I have to admit, this has me confused, but in a good way, I think. Hmm....
Wow, creepy! After hearing and seeing that, I'd need a drink too! But in a way, he's right, in war there sometimes are no winners or losers and only desolation at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!