| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 19 May 2013 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Gazer (Anonymous)
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Wonderful! I hope you will continue this story!
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 17 May 2013 1:11 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love these chapters you always write ! I've gotten to the point were they are pretty much the only thing i read ! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!! ( please forgot to say please)
I really enjoy this story, especially this last chapter!! The relationship between Harry and Snape is really coming along in a realistic way (and I love what you promise for reviews lol) Anyway, please update soon! :D
| Title: Choices and Other Serious Business
| 15 Jan 2013 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: Jj (Anonymous)
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| Title: After the Shrieking Shack
| 06 Jan 2013 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Caitlyn (Anonymous)
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Where's the rest of the story? It is really good but I want to know what happens next!!!!
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 02 Jan 2013 12:40 am
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| Reviewer: David (Anonymous)
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| Title: Weltschmerz
| 19 Dec 2012 2:10 am
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| Reviewer: JD (Anonymous)
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"He methodically sorted them into three piles: Innocuous, Age Inappropriate, and Never in Hell."
I lol'd. Best line ever
I understand that you said CP was normal in the wizarding world, but that's a lot of corporal punishment, even for people to whom it is acceptable. Generally one or two spanks is enough. Even then, spankings on top of a lecture and a long time out is quite unnecessary. Aside from that Harry wasn't even given a warning. Good parenting practice is to at least give a child a warning to stop whatever it is they're doing first and then punish later if they continue the bad behavior they've been warned about. Harry is just taken by surprise after he's already been punished and then punished again, and severely. This may be Snape's personality, but I cannot ever see this as being proper parenting in the wizarding world. Other than the over-doing of the CP the story is good. It seems however that the entire story is based around and geared towards an overload of CP. Is that the point of this story?
I love your pleas for reviews. So inventive! Makes me laugh.
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 05 Jun 2011 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed)
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Nice and interessting story.
CCAP
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 27 Apr 2011 7:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Shinju (Anonymous)
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Why is this wonderful story dead? I've read all chapters one after another to eventually encounter "to be continued", and it has not been updated since March 24 2009!!!
Back to the story. I love how you pictured the characters realistically. You've managed to avoid what many fanfiction authors do, namely making the word black-white.
I also like your approach if Dursleys are concerned. You haven't overdone them, yet you have shown they abused Harry mentally by showing him indifference and disregard, not overindulging in some surrealistic images of terrible physical abuse which miraculously remained unnoticed.
PLEASE, DO UPDATE SOON
PS I love your chapter end notes, they are thoroughly amusing :) I appreciate you have not used a single concept more than once.
PS2 Forgive my possible spelling (or any other) mistakes. Even if it's weak excuse, I must point out I'm not native speaker.
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