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Reviews For A Day to Remember
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 23 Feb 2013 8:39 am
Reviewer: bookworm101 (Signed) [Report This]
    good job with the story I really liked it
    the story goes well the the character profiles of the oringal story line
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 02 Oct 2012 12:56 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    I just had to laugh at the sentiment of Snape being "Harry's git"! I really enjoyed this story, watching their tentative relationship starting to unfold. Great duel, fun Quidditch match! And really cool to have Harry play "father/son matchmaker" with Remus & Neville! Great job! You packed a lot into a 3-chapter story, and I loved every minute I spent reading it! :-)
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 27 Nov 2011 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    That was fluff....I'm not complaing tho lol

    Author's Response: LOL Everyone needs fluff once in awhile!
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 19 Oct 2011 7:02 am
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story! Your description of the Quidditch game was fantastic. I felt like I was there, which is a mark of great writing, in my opinion. :)

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I'm honoured that you think so.
Title: Chapter 1: Manipulation 28 Aug 2011 7:33 pm
Reviewer: silver-slytherin65 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great idea,, i love it

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 06 Apr 2011 3:09 am
Reviewer: missyanne (Signed) [Report This]
    It seems as if Dumbledore's plan worked,. And poor Severus...an honourary Gryfindor. Oh the humanity LOL! Loved it, Dawn. Great work.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much Missy. You are so sweet.
Title: Chapter 2: Compromise 06 Apr 2011 2:54 am
Reviewer: missyanne (Signed) [Report This]
    Boy...Severus really needs to get a grip on his temper. Lucky for him, Harry takes after his mum. Still loving it. On for more.

    Missyann

    Author's Response: Snape? A temper? Nah...LOL Yeah, glad that Harry is so forgiving.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Missy.
Title: Chapter 1: Manipulation 06 Apr 2011 2:36 am
Reviewer: Missy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this, Dawn. Dumbledore does love his scemes, doesn't he?

    Author's Response: Yes! He certainly does, and he's as manipulative as hell!
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 12 Oct 2009 1:37 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it. I think I'll read it again now.

    Your characters are perfect! The way you had Snape show his approval to Harry with small nods and gestures was spot on! And you manage to add tons of details in only three charpters. I'd love a sequel!

    Wonderful story!

    Author's Response:

    Oh thanks so much!

     

    Well, right now, I've got two regualr stories going on, and a fest story that's due at the end of November, which I haven't even started yet, but maybe a little later down the road.

     

    Thanks so much for your kind words!

     

    I love your stories too, and I'm looking forward to an update soon. Hint hint!

Title: Chapter 2: Compromise 12 Oct 2009 12:54 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh...mushy-ish moment. Your Snape is written brilliantly. You manage to keep him pretty much in character, but at the same time soften him up a bit.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. It's hard to keep Sanpe in character sometimes, especially when you want to show him softening up a bit. I'm glad that you thought that I've accomplished that.
Title: Chapter 1: Manipulation 12 Oct 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Well this is going to be interesting!

    I love how Dumbledore convinced to Snape to participate.

    Neville's reaction was exactly what I imagined it would be.

    On to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh hi!

     Thank you. Yes Dumbledore is very persuasive, and guilt works very well!

    Yeah, Neville is feeling rather left out.

     

Title: Chapter 3: Victory 25 Aug 2009 12:35 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. Cute ending! Great story.
    This was a fantastic description: 'made his body plunge downwards, the long strands of his pale hair, which caught the sunlight, stood on end, framing his head like a glittering halo.' LOL!! I would so LOVE to see the actors, particularly Jason Isaacs acting this scene out! It would be brilliant to watch on a big screen don't ya think? x

    Author's Response:

    Aw thanks.

     

    It's funny that you should say that, because I was picturing him in my mind with his golden hair straight up like that, while his broom lost gravity. I would just love to see it really played out on the big screen too. Love Jason Isaacs as Lucius.


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