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Reviews For Making Things Even
Title: Making Things Even 04 Nov 2012 11:53 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Really liked this.
Title: Making Things Even 30 May 2011 10:44 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice.
    CCAP
Title: Making Things Even 30 May 2011 10:44 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice.
    CCAP
Title: Making Things Even 30 May 2011 10:43 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice and interessting.
    CCAP
Title: Making Things Even 21 Feb 2011 3:02 am
Reviewer: Drayconette (Signed) [Report This]
    Someday, Mark Evans was determined he'd find this 'Everybody' and kick him in the balls.
    Best line ever.
Title: Making Things Even 12 Dec 2010 7:29 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. Great story!
Title: Making Things Even 21 Jul 2010 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely ace! :)

    I like your characterization of Mark, and the way you let us into his head. I liked how you had Snape do such a terrific and clever thing as to have Dobby help resolve the problem with Sirius and the need for Harry to have a new and safe home, and yet stay his snarky, Slytherin self. :) And I liked how at the end you showed Mark's Slytherin nature in the final line.

    Well done!
Title: Making Things Even 07 Jul 2010 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the story but felt the ending was alittle rushed but I'm greedy and would like more!
Title: Making Things Even 13 Apr 2010 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    You have a flair for narrative and your characterisation of Mark Evans is likable and has depth. Nice touches of humour. The ending felt a little rushed, however.
Title: Making Things Even 04 Apr 2010 1:30 am
Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it! Very clever-very clever indeed. I especially like Mark.
Title: Making Things Even 09 Jun 2009 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Kristin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I *loved* this story. You make Mark into such a great character & I'm glad that someone finally decides to help Harry.
Title: Making Things Even 04 Jun 2009 8:28 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    good story! Mark was good as an original character too. :)

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