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Title: Pax Vobiscum 02 Nov 2011 2:49 pm
Reviewer: Dezra (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great story so far. So descriptive.
Title: Pax Vobiscum 01 Nov 2011 1:59 pm
Reviewer: HogwartsIsMyHome 91 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an excellent ff. (On a different note I found this a while ago but my grandmother had just passed from cancer which made it tough to read for a while)

    Anyways you write perfect or almost flawlessly. I can't wait for an update!

    I love Pottermore too (WizardPixie61 here!)! Those papers sound awful.

    Again a very well written story.
Title: Pax Vobiscum 01 Nov 2011 1:01 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    School must come first, but I'll be waiting to see what the next chapter brings at the end of your semester. :)

    Harry, Harry, Harry! If only you'd tell your friends that being physically touched hurts, then they'd back off. But they can't read your mind, so you need to TELL them!

    Yes, I'm a tad frustrated with Harry right now, but I also understand why he was behaving that way. Guilt is a hard thing to handle anyway, but when it's self-inflicted, it is even more difficult to snap out of.

    Snape, as always was wonderfully in character, even as he showed his compassion for Harry. I like it that you show his frustration when things get really aggravating, whether with his own decision, Harry's actions, Moody's insistence that he's untrustworthy, or Dumbledore's continuing monofocus on Harry as the only solution to the Voldemort problem.

    I liked the wand part of the ceremony. I wanted to smack Dumbledore though, for dumping the burden on Harry once again. :P If Dumbledore is the only wizard that Moldy-Voldy fears, then why the heck isn't Dumbledore facing off to him instead of leaving it all to Harry? I certainly don't think that the prophecy is something set in stone. I swear that by the time I got done with HPHBP, I wanted to revive the Headmaster and ream him out for being a bloody coward. Ah, well... I won't waste your time with more of my rant. *wry grin*

    I do like your story very much, and I'm glad that you were able to get the new chapter done. I look forward to the next chapter whenever you can fit writing for fun time into your busy schedule.

    Well Done!
Title: Pax Vobiscum 30 Oct 2011 6:23 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay to updates!! poor Harry, im so glad that he has Severus to look after him :D
Title: Pax Vobiscum 29 Oct 2011 12:16 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I hope things start to get better rather than worse.
    Great job as always...Please update soon!
Title: Pax Vobiscum 28 Oct 2011 4:02 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Good luck with your papers!

    Good chapter, too, btw. ;-)
Title: Pax Vobiscum 28 Oct 2011 3:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I wish I could just give him a big hug.

    Glad that he has Sev.

    So glad that you've updated Ella. Good luck with your school and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Pax Vobiscum 27 Oct 2011 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    This was well worth the wait! I cannot wait to see more of the those two's relationship growing. By the way, does Harry know yet that Sev's real last name is Prince and that his own is Hadrian? Please let him know if he doesn't!

    I cannot wait to see if Sev takes him to the therapist or not. I think it would be really beneficial and if Sev addresses it as someone just for Harry to talk to and normalize the action of going to the therapist; Harry might be more receptive. That's what I do for my patients.

    Have a great day and thanks for the story!
Title: Pax Vobiscum 27 Oct 2011 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Chandramas (Signed) [Report This]
    I missed this story SOOO MUCH! Glad you're keeping writing!!! it was lovely, but last line is one of the sweetest one ever! Just two words but they means a lot!!!!
Title: Pax Vobiscum 27 Oct 2011 4:24 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wanted to let you know I enjoyed this chapter so much. Poor Harry, poor Severus. It just isn't fair Harry has to deal with so much. At least his last nightmare "woke" him up to the real world and that he knows Severus is there for him. Nice chapter away from the "medical drama" and more of a people chapter. Thanks! If I have to I will wait for six months for another update.
Title: Pax Vobiscum 27 Oct 2011 3:49 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for another well-done chapter.

    I was glad that Harry wanted to be near Severus, in spite of what happened last chapter.

    Maybe he's starting to fully accept who his father is instead of just knowing it.
Title: Pax Vobiscum 27 Oct 2011 1:58 pm
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! That chapter was simply amazing!!! Well worth the wait, as will be the next! I was so excited to see this update in my box!!! Good luck with your papers!

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