Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
Anyways you write perfect or almost flawlessly. I can't wait for an update!
I love Pottermore too (WizardPixie61 here!)! Those papers sound awful.
Again a very well written story.
Harry, Harry, Harry! If only you'd tell your friends that being physically touched hurts, then they'd back off. But they can't read your mind, so you need to TELL them!
Yes, I'm a tad frustrated with Harry right now, but I also understand why he was behaving that way. Guilt is a hard thing to handle anyway, but when it's self-inflicted, it is even more difficult to snap out of.
Snape, as always was wonderfully in character, even as he showed his compassion for Harry. I like it that you show his frustration when things get really aggravating, whether with his own decision, Harry's actions, Moody's insistence that he's untrustworthy, or Dumbledore's continuing monofocus on Harry as the only solution to the Voldemort problem.
I liked the wand part of the ceremony. I wanted to smack Dumbledore though, for dumping the burden on Harry once again. :P If Dumbledore is the only wizard that Moldy-Voldy fears, then why the heck isn't Dumbledore facing off to him instead of leaving it all to Harry? I certainly don't think that the prophecy is something set in stone. I swear that by the time I got done with HPHBP, I wanted to revive the Headmaster and ream him out for being a bloody coward. Ah, well... I won't waste your time with more of my rant. *wry grin*
I do like your story very much, and I'm glad that you were able to get the new chapter done. I look forward to the next chapter whenever you can fit writing for fun time into your busy schedule.
I cannot wait to see if Sev takes him to the therapist or not. I think it would be really beneficial and if Sev addresses it as someone just for Harry to talk to and normalize the action of going to the therapist; Harry might be more receptive. That's what I do for my patients.
Have a great day and thanks for the story!
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