| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 20 Sep 2012 8:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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This is so sweet. I love Harry and Severus' thoughts are so funny thank you,
Muahahhahahahhaa. I love little Harry.
| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 01 Aug 2010 2:08 am
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| Reviewer: Caesara (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this!
And while I do think it was a bit unfair for Dumbledore to load Harry onto Severus like that, it was very comical. (especially Harry using Snape's toothbrush)
...umm I'm wondering how Snape will react when he learns that Harry will be there forever. I'm sure he won't be too happy.
good job!
| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 06 Mar 2010 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 04 Jan 2010 10:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed)
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OMG!! That was so cute angel! I don't know why I didn't see this before, but this was amazing! XD Snape being Snape and then Harry being all cute! XD This was adorable. Poor Snape though, can't get away from a pair of bright green eyes. *snickers* Not that he really wanted to of course. The ending was perfect too. Wonderful story!! I give it two thumbs up...and a toe. :D
| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 08 Dec 2009 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Aw, great story! I loved it. Everyone was so in-character, and Severus is wonderful.
Snicker.
What a perfect child potter. Trying to guess his age here... 4? Anyway, the reactions are right on.
K
| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 06 Dec 2009 2:14 am
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| Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Lol! That was great! I loved the conversation between Snape and Dumbledore at the start, there are some great lines there, especially the "Ah, it’s *my* fault. So sorry, I hadn’t realised." :) Poor Snape, being railroaded into everything. But in this case it's all for his own good, since having Harry around will be good for him.
I liked the way you portrayed Harry, all silent and scuttling; the poor kid must have been scared out of his wits. The library scene was great, I love the image of a frustrated Snape shoving Harry in front of a book.
The humour in this story is wonderful, Snape's sarcasm is great. Lines like "Was he really so low down in the hierarchy that Prince Potter could not even bring himself to speak to him?" are just so Snape and so funny. But the imaginary boggart is the best bit, that's just so funny! I love that he checked Dumbledore wasn't around before looking under the bed. But oh boy is he not going to be happy when he wakes up! Awesome!
I really enjoyed this fic, it was heaps of fun and made me grin like an idiot :) Thanks for writing!
If you ever get the chance to do more in this universe, I'll read it. I always wanted to see Harry taken away from the Dursleys.
| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 30 Nov 2009 12:47 am
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| Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
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I'd love to be a fly on the wall when Dumbledore tells Snape that the one-week stay is going to be a life time one. :)
Harry seems very sweet and scared. It must be terrifying to be placed with someone he doesn't know and isn't exactly friendly.
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it immensely. I would love to see that too, Snape will probably need to be taken straight to St.Mungos but even then he will get discharged (eventually!) and won't be allowed to shirk his duty, hehe the joys of torturing Snape in such cute ways. I love little Harry in fanfiction, he just seems so vulnerable compared to the teenager who stood up to Voldemort. A lot of my stories seem to have a small Harry in, just because I love reading/writing him! Thanks again!
| Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All?
| 24 Nov 2009 2:17 am
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| Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Anonymous)
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Sweet. I loved the ending the most. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I am so glad you liked it! A lot of thanks needs to go to Gracie; she made it readable!
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