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Reviews For A Dangerous Game
Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 20 Oct 2010 4:59 pm
Reviewer: IchigoMirai (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really really good so far!! wonder what'll happen next...

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. Aw, keep on reading to find out! :O)
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 15 Sep 2010 2:24 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! *applauds* Well done. I like it.

    Now... where's the sequel? ^^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Dream!

     

    Uh...sequel? Well..I'm a leetle busy right now wirting three stories, but I was going to, and I "did" promise at the time, so maybe in the future...

Title: Chapter 9: The Best Laid Plans 15 Sep 2010 1:51 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a pleasant chap, old Voldie. Sweetest of dispositions. The sky is also orange, btw, and pigs can fly.

    ^^

    Nicely writ.

    Author's Response:

    Hip hip cheerie old Voldie chap. Oh look there's something in the air...it's a plane...it's a bird...NO!...It's a flying pig playing in an orange sky.

     

    Thanks! :)

Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties 15 Sep 2010 1:36 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw... that was nice of Severus. ^^ (But let's not tell him I said that...)

    Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Shhhhh!!! I won't tell Severus either.

     

    Thanks DP!

Title: Chapter 5: Say what? 14 Sep 2010 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, goodness, poor kid. Just what he was (NOT) hoping for. Well, this should certainly prove interesting, at least, neh? ^^

    Author's Response: Yeah, it sure took him by a loop. Not what he imagined at all. Yup, interesting indeed.
Title: Chapter 3: A Broken Dream, A Broken Mirror 14 Sep 2010 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, yes. A dementer surely would give Dudley reason for introspection, wouldn't it?

    Poor Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Dudley was affected very deeply by that experience.

     

    Yeah, the poor kid always has the worst sort of luck, doesn't he?

Title: Chapter 1: Darkness and Light 14 Sep 2010 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm. Intriguing start.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 26 Dec 2009 12:09 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Harry finally has what he has always longed for, a parent that loves and cares for him. Someone who will do anything to protect him.

    Author's Response: Oh thanks. Yeah, it took awhile to get there, but Snape will be there for Harry in a way that no one else has ever been.  Yes, and he would even die to protect Harry.
Title: Chapter 11: End of Game 22 Dec 2009 5:55 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "I will not use my new and improved super powers to conspire with the evil medi-witch, Madame Pompfrey, to imprison my Professsor and father, against his will in this dreadful hospital wing."- Best. Line. EVER!! I laughed so hard I think I woke everyone up in the house! XD That whole section of Severus trying to sneak out was just brilliant!! XD I'm still giggling looking at it! Brilliant!

    And phew! I thought Sev was a goner for a minute, especially when Dumbledore just said they couldn't help Snape. Yay super powers! lol And the end with the birthday party, well that was adorable. Yays Snape! The last line was perfect.

    Fantastic story, Pandora! Sorry it took so long to read it, but it was amazing. I enjoyed it lots! :D

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee! Thanks. Yeah, Sev does NOT like being an invalid, or feeling helpless.

     

    Harry got angry and saved Severus. I think that both our boys are starting to care for each other more than they'd like to admit.

     Thanks Ivy. I'm so honoured that you took the time to not only read the story, you actually reviewed each chappie. Thanks so much.

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets 22 Dec 2009 5:36 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    CUTE!! XD Harry and Snape are getting along! YAYS! I did like it when Snape would yell at Harry and then be all "Did you eat?" That made me smile. And the whole letter bit, I thought Harry was going to get it then. But luckily that potion had really started to work because I bet old Snape wouldn't have cared overly much if he laid into the boy a little. Phew! Harry was lucky there! And seeing Harry and Snape getting along, even having a- dare I say- heart to heart was just beautiful. But I did find a little mistake. The very last word you added a "g" to Slytherin. No worries though. (I do that all the time while typing) Brilliant chappie!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oops, I'lll go fix the g on Slytherin. Thanks for pointing that out.

     

    Yeah, I think that Snape (dare I say it) is mellowing out a bit Hee hee!  Yeah, heart to heart, and I just used YOUR expression.

     

    Yeah, Snape is finding it hard to maintain his anger, because he keeps feeling the need to care and protect Harry, and although he would deny it, it's not just the potion making him feeling that way.



    Author's Response:

    Oops, I'lll go fix the g on Slytherin. Thanks for pointing that out.

     

    Yeah, I think that Snape (dare I say it) is mellowing out a bit Hee hee!  Yeah, heart to heart, and I just used YOUR expression.

     

    Yeah, Snape is finding it hard to maintain his anger, because he keeps feeling the need to care and protect Harry, and although he would deny it, it's not just the potion making him feeling that way.

Title: Chapter 9: The Best Laid Plans 22 Dec 2009 5:06 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! While I'm pleased that Severus and Harry seem to be getting along fine, I'm NOT pleased that Narcissa and Draco were tortured. Poor Snape! To be torn between the two worlds like that! That would be terrible. And to give such a potion to the babies? That's just wrong. Poor little things...but this was a very interesting chapter. I enjoyed Remus putting some sense into Harry's head! Another great chapter Pandora! :D

    Author's Response:

    Aw, you are so sweet Ivy!  You reviewed every chapter, and wrote such a brilliant chappie yourself. Well done.

    Yeah, it was awful that Voldie tortured Narcissa and Draco. It IS awful for him to be torn like that, and Voldemort has no conscience at all, does he?  

     

    Remus is coming around to see a very different side of Snape, and he wants Harry to see that.  Thanks again Ivy.

Title: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties 21 Dec 2009 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Severus Snape, Deatheater-Extraordinaire"- Now that just made me laugh really hard for some reason. Sounds like a personal ad, doesn't it? I suddenly could hear one of those old radio sales people come on from like the 20's or '30. XD It was too perfect.

    Anywho, on with the review...While I'm enjoying Snape being old Snape, I couldn't help the "awww!" moment when he tucked Harry into bed and then left the warmed food out for him. ^_^ Snape's so cute! And Poor Harry all sad and bitter. I hate it when people get really bitter. It's really not good for their health. But WAKE UP HARRY!! You HAVE a father-type figure now! Or you will later. It's hard to keep hating someone when you're forced to live with them, even for a short while. (I know from traveling around and having roommates! XD ) But I hope Harry doesn't go over board with his own revenge. It's sounds worrisome to me...but I guess if it brings Snape and Harry closer...what a father/son outing THAT would be? lol Another brilliant chappie Pandora!

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee! "I" would answer "that" ad for sure.  Sexy, hot cute Potions Master,  needs cuddling, but keep it secret, he's very prickly.

     

    Yeah, I like tohose little moments when Severus shows just a tiny bit of affection for Harry, without realiising it.   Hopefull, Harry will realise what he has in Snape, and look behind the reserved exterior.  Harry needs to let go of his anger and his quest for revenge. Maybe Snape can pull him in if he goes too far.  Yeah...what a reunion. 

     

    Thanks Ivy, for the lovely review.


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