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Title: Decisions of the Sorting Hat 16 Feb 2013 7:15 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting and long song. I wonder if and when people will figure out he was once the Harry Potter

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. As for when/if people will find out, I can't say. I haven't written that far ahead, but I can say that if it does happen it won't be for quite a while yet. Thanks for the review. 

Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 12 Jan 2013 11:54 pm
Reviewer: a reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story, you are a great writer and I was so glad when you regularly updated, but now it has been quiet for some time. I really hope that everything is alright and that youŽll continue with the story. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, please update sooon!
Title: A Rubbish Situation 20 Dec 2012 11:21 am
Reviewer: Wicked Kisses (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to say this is a fascinating story. I do think, though, that you shouldn't foreshadow events so much. I like the way you brought Severus into the story. I'm pretty sure, though, that 'The Trace' would be able to keep track of Harry, unless you have decided not to use it.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. The Trace won't work for other reasons, which would be explained later. Also, you said I was foreshadowing events quite a lot, however to my knowledge I have not foreshadowed much at all, only enabled my readers to make assumptions. Could you please tell me some examples and what parts is "so much", in case I missed something? And I am very curious to understand your comment. Thank you for your feedback :)
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 27 Nov 2012 12:27 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just re-reading this story and I was wondering if everything is alright. You've been a rather quick updater and it's been over a month since we've last heard from this story. Is it abandoned? I surely hope not because this has been one of my favorite stories so far! Please update again soon, I hope this story hasn't been 'forgotten'! :)
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 27 Nov 2012 12:24 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just re-reading this story and was
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 05 Nov 2012 1:38 am
Reviewer: marksmom (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is excellent so far...can't wait to read more!
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 04 Nov 2012 7:17 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    i am loving this so far and can't wait to read more i think casey may be hufflepuff or raven claw the others not too sure though Logan comes across as slytherin
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 12 Oct 2012 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lot of characters to digest Haylee seems a less opiniated Hermione and Oscar a nice character. Thank you for updating
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 11 Oct 2012 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. It is so hood to see different characters personalities in doiffrrrnt children. Not where ones sees Draco and automatically thinks he is a pest.
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 10 Oct 2012 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh and one more thing I forgot to mention. The first thing I noticed about this chapter are the names of your OC characters. They seem be common American names. While the characters themselves seem fascinating, the names threw me off a bit. Out of curiosity, what is your reasoning for this?

    Author's Response:

    Yeah? I'm glad you like the characters themelves, however, in for their names and the reasoning behind their selections: please see the edited end author's notes of chapter 20. Thanks!

Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 10 Oct 2012 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a wonderful chapter. I believe that you truly captured all of Harry's emotions- the excitement, the nervousness, the fear. It was fun to read!

    I also like the way you've already started molding these characters and making them seem so three dimensional in such a short time. I'm already very intriguied by Casey. I wonder what his background is. At first I thought he was another Malfoy, classic blonde hair and skepticism for Muggles, but perhaps it is not quite so. And I wonder what Logan's and Conner's problems are! I mean really, talk about a bad first impression. I look forward to getting to know each of these new characters. Haylee seems very sweet and for some reason, I imagine Oscar will be a more comedic character.

    Hey, was the Casey the son of those strange people you once mentioned in a chapter?

    As for the sorting, my personal preference would be towards Slytherin not just because it is Severus's house but also because Harry had to fight for survival for a part of his childhood. I feel that Gryffindor doesn't seem to fit him very well because he's not exactly a loud running head first into a situation type of boy. Anyways, I look forward to reading more about the Sorting.

    Also, is Severus going to be there for Harry's sorting. I thought that since he's going to be a professor there (one can assume), he would show up.

    I'm so glad to hear that the wait won't be too long for the next chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
Title: Travelling on the Hogwarts Express 10 Oct 2012 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a wonderful chapter. I believe that you truly captured all of Harry's emotions- the excitement, the nervousness, the fear. It was fun to read!

    I also like the way you've already started molding these characters and making them seem so three dimensional in such a short time. I'm already very intriguied by Casey. I wonder what his background is. At first I thought he was another Malfoy, classic blonde hair and skepticism for Muggles, but perhaps it is not quite so. And I wonder what Logan's and Conner's problems are! I mean really, talk about a bad first impression. I look forward to getting to know each of these new characters. Haylee seems very sweet and for some reason, I imagine Oscar will be a more comedic character.

    Hey, was the Casey the son of those strange people you once mentioned in a chapter?

    As for the sorting, my personal preference would be towards Slytherin not just because it is Severus's house but also because Harry had to fight for survival for a part of his childhood. I feel that Gryffindor doesn't seem to fit him very well because he's not exactly a loud running head first into a situation type of boy. Anyways, I look forward to reading more about the Sorting.

    Also, is Severus going to be there for Harry's sorting. I thought that since he's going to be a professor there (one can assume), he would show up.

    I'm so glad to hear that the wait won't be too long for the next chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks you, I'm glad you thought so :). I'm really pleased Harry's emotions translated well, as I really wanted to show what it was like for him at that moment of time. I loved reading your review, though I always do! Casey isn't another Malfoy, no. Logan and Conner...well, every character I have shown will be explored throughout the story, so you'll learn more about them all as time goes along. Haylee is sweet, though. She's very kind and friendly. Oscar...haha, yeah. As for the son of the mentioned "people", I cannot reveal that yet. Your guess is interesting, though.

    I can't say what house I placed Harry into, as you'll find out soon, though back when I wrote the next chapter I spent a while reasoning it out to make sure it fit the story and his upbringing. Your facts were part of the consideration, so kudos for that. I think you'll enjoy the sorting ceremony - I did try to make the event itself more unique to this story, including a sorting song of my creation that will be part of the overall story plots.

    Severus is not a professor in this story, which will be detailed on in the next chapter. Therefore, due to this and other factors, he will not be there to watch Harry be sorted. Neither will Erin. I also wanted Harry to go through it on his own, without his parents for the first time in a long time. Thank you very much for your review, it provided me insight and entertainment. I will be updating again when I can, likely a couple days from now. I'm thrilled you're looking forward to reading more. Thanks, again! 


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