This was truly unique throughout, especially given that Harry & Snape teamed up to fight Voldemort on his own ground, so to speak. Loved your presentation of dear Dobby (!), and terrific that he got "promoted" from the life of a regular house elf in the end. :-) Also, so sweet with Snape and Heaven in this final chapter-- far from being OOC, perhaps Snape is finally back IN character, hmm? Great job!
A lovely story and ending.
very nice. loved the ending!
| Title: Chapter 20: New Beginnings
| 24 Oct 2012 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wow! What a terrific story! I loved it!
It's hard to say what I liked best, but I think, in the end, it comes down to your inspired use of Dobby and the unknown and intriguing powers of the House Elves as the method of destroying Voldemort.
I look forward to your eventual publication of Heaven's story--will it be posted here? Or at the Site Which Shall Not Be Named?
Regardless, I will happily read anything you come up with here at P&S. This is going on my favorites list, and I'm going to be recommending it to my friends who love Sev and Harry genfics. :-)
Well done!
| Title: Chapter 20: New Beginnings
| 23 Oct 2012 3:12 am
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Great story, though I found the end left me wanting more! It seemed a rather abrubt ending. Oh well. Three cheers for Dobby the hero!!!
| Title: Chapter 19: Love and Loyalty
| 22 Oct 2012 6:15 am
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Thanks for the quick update, do it again please please please please please!!!!! A great great great story!! I love that Dobby saved the day, lol, brilliant!!!
Omg!! Snape and Lily had a child before Harry. Wow! Shocking.
I hope that Harry can stay strong. Omg That evil monster. Please update soon!
I only have one thing to say, UPDATE NOW!!!!!! Gotta know what happens next and I don't wanna wait to find out!!!
| Title: Chapter 9: Never Say Never
| 20 Oct 2012 10:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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What a great story!
I am so glad that I discovered it finally.
I hope that Snape can help Harry prevent Voldie from driving him mad, and that they can defeat him once and for all.
| Title: Chapter 17: And So It Begins
| 20 Oct 2012 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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This is such an amazing story. I am having a hard time stopping reading. You are doing a great job with the characters, just that little twist for a change. So glad you are using Dobby and giving him more of a presence. I always felt he was ignored a lot in canon.
Please update soon, I can't wait to know what happens next!
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