Reviews For Snape's Memories
There is not much more to say about it, so I'll just point out what I liked most ;)
I liked that the charakters seemed realistic, I mean they reacted like any sensible person would react. Well maybe except for Smith. I liked that Tim just seemed to fit into their family and how you wrote it. And I liked that Harry was visited in his dreams and that he never figured out that Tim is Severus. And I liked that Tims name is so... normal and that he doesn't resembel Severus. It is more natural this way.
There are so much things I liked that I cannot write them all, so I'll leave it at this.
(PS Please excuse any mistakes you find, English is not my mother tongue but I always do my very best ;))
Such a wonderful conclusion! I like that Harry doesn't really clearly remember his dreams, and that his knowledge of Tim's identity isn't conscious.
This entire fic was a most enjoyable read (truly, I had difficulty dragging myself away to do homework). You have a wonderful way with words and the images you paint are so clear and well thought.
Absolutely delightful, clear through. A definite favorite--10 for 10.
"In your state, it would be a hookah-smoking-caterpillar." snorted the man.
There are no words to express the amount of love for those lines. I fangirled. Complete with flailing.
Love this chapter.
Now, I must go find out who's screaming and why. D:
This chapter is a great start--I'm looking forward to the reading through the rest of the tale.
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PS. I really like your world-building and writing.
"Maybe, you're supposed to see that your patient actually gets to where he's supposed to go!" shouted Ernie at her,
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