Since Harry didn't grow up with a Dad, I don't see how he'd feel that Lily is replacing James with Severus...
And I can't see how Lily is replacing James with Severus. They're two completely different men, and they had completely different relationships with her, even if both were in love with her.
I absolutely love this story. :D
I'm very interested in thedevelopments this storyhas given your choice of characters. The sheer humanity you'vegiven each character has drawn in my interest. I'm hoping to see more soon. Thanks.
||10 May 2013 10:09 am
|Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous)
Does it bother anybody else that Lilly seems to be replacing James with Snape? If I were Harry I would have been a heck of a lot less accepting of the situation then he is. I'm really surprised that Harry has not yet pulled the "You're not my father" card on Snape. It seems really out of charecter for him to be so accepting of Snapes authority.
Great an update! I really enjoyed this chapter! Does Harry have dyslexia? Can't wait for the next chapter!
||08 May 2013 2:29 am
|Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous)
Thanks for the lovely chapter. Look forward to the next one.
excellent so far please update soon
I really like your story. I hope Harry can realize soon that Snape would be a great father figure. Of course Snape should realize too that this is his chance to have a family with Lily.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope your update will be more regular :-)
I finally read this and it's awesome.
And I'm assuming Harry is dyslexic? I'm guessing they haven't gotten that far in the Wizarding world yet, based on Lily and Sev's lack of understanding.
Harry sounds like he might be dsylexic..I'm gld you you updated.
Update soon. Does Harry have dyslexia?
God, I'm insane. I think I dreamed this story was updated! LOL!
|Title: The Deal
||29 Mar 2012 6:31 am
|Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
So good! Please update soon!