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Reviews For My Secret Father
Title: The Journal 22 May 2013 12:23 pm
Reviewer: UltramarineQuest (Signed) [Report This]
    Brill!!
Title: The Journal 19 May 2013 7:21 pm
Reviewer: BLEH (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this, very well written and a good story line.
Title: In The Ranks 30 Apr 2013 6:50 pm
Reviewer: Daisy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The Dark Mark is placed on the left arm, not the right. You should fix that, because it takes away from the believability of the story. It's just so basic a detail.
Title: The Journal 30 Apr 2013 8:31 am
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus, he is in for a huge self-hating trip whilst reading the journal.
Title: The Journal 26 Apr 2013 4:38 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    you were right, this was worth reading all the way through, even though it started off sad. I'm glad things began to turn around.
Title: The Journal 07 Apr 2013 11:59 pm
Reviewer: SRAM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If you do continue the story line, you should make it an angst ridden story about Harry, kenai, and snapes attempt to form a family. Obviously, kenai has been a single child for years, as well as has been bullying harry for years, so how will he be able to change his behavior quickly? And snape will have to learn how to deal with two sons. And it should allow us to learn more about Harry's time at the dursleys.
Title: The Journal 15 Jan 2013 3:36 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is really very forgiving
Title: The Journal 22 May 2012 1:55 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    What a perfect ending!
    I loved this fic! I loved Draco and Harry and the slowly forming relationship between Severus and Harry and Kenai.
    Great job!
Title: P.S. I Hate You 12 May 2012 9:14 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    The deadline is August 31st. You get your invitation when you are eleven. No invitation, no Hogwarts.

    Never mind. I hope you do not take it as criticism. As you said, Snape took him earlier. I would do the same. I liked this story, so don't take this the wrong way, please.

    Here we have the system deadline August 31st, but you can get exception if "you are prepared to go to school" and you are born before the end of December.

    Author's Response:

    Ha ha I just don't think there is a place that says that in the books.  You can get your letter if you 'will' be that age by a certain deadline.


    Thanks again for the reviews.

Title: The Journal 11 May 2012 8:56 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Lived happily together. Forever.
Title: Summons 11 May 2012 8:52 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Why crazy Bella didnt kill Harry?
Title: Hell Bound 11 May 2012 7:55 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is cracking

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