Ooooh, I really like this story^^
You don't take pleasure in watching your characters suffer, which is one of the most common faults for authors of slave-fics, in my opinion.
Keep up the good work^^
Really hope Sev gets his memory back..I'm really sad as of right now though
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Good job! I like your writing style and your stories are unique!
Love this :) update soon.
Poor sev, I hope he is ok
Poor Severus, he went through hell... Everyone at the Ministry that was involved with the whole slave scam should be sent to Azkaban! I hope Hermione is able to succeed with her plans of justice :).
Author's Response: I do hope too :P
Thanks for updating! :) x
Author's Response: Next chapter should be up soon. I'm discussing it with my beta right now.
|Title: Chapter 8
||12 Jun 2011 8:28 am
|Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous)
Great chapter, can't wait for more. How old is Snape? Will Albus Severus still be named after sweet Snape.
Author's Response: Snape is 39, unless my math is off - he was born in 1960, the story takes place in 1999 (and onwards in future chapters; I plan for it to reach Lily Luna's birth at least).
Albus Severus will be named after Snape - there's a surprise planned regarding his birth and why he is named so (and no, I mean no infidelity here - it's not my cup of tea).
|Title: Chapter 8
||11 Jun 2011 11:34 pm
|Reviewer: karmasucks (Anonymous)
this seems to plagarize two stories. never heard of penal servitude but you are defiantly stealing ideas from unwell. inspiration? its called stealing.
Author's Response: The differences:
In general - Unwell has no Ginny, Harry taking care of Teddy and not allowing Severus too close to the kid, and slash.
More precisely - Unwell is about Severus battling his personal demons left by his previous owners;
while Servitude is about Harry/Ginny married life and about Severus taking care of the children. Right now it's only Teddy, but in a few years James Sirius, Albus Severus and Lily Luna will arrive.
Severus will lose his attitude of a slave in roughly a year.
I plan on some delightful interactions when Severus first sees each of the Potter children and learns their names; and there's a surprise regarding A.S.P.'s birth and why he is so named.