Wow, a brilliant ending! This was certainly unexpected!
Wow. I did not expect that at all. Lol I love this and I think you should definately continue it in a series. I want to know more about Severus and how he reacts to finding out about his godfather.
Peace!
CheyRain
| Title: Chapter 1
| 26 Jun 2011 5:08 am
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| Reviewer: Eliza (Anonymous)
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A very sweet story. I love how you portrayed Albus Severus... er, Severus Albus... whatever.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 22 May 2011 10:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story I wish theis had been the ending thank you
Amazing! What a twist at the end! I wondered that you had invented a relative, but I had never even thought that it would turn out to be Severus! Very well done!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 22 May 2011 6:59 am
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| Reviewer: FOSS (Anonymous)
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This story is so sweet...
Thank you very much for writing and sharing :)
I think this is my favorite Albus Severus story. I like how you did the letters. most people make the letters seem like a joke opposed to something heartfelt. I can't wait to see your next work.
I think this is my favorite Albus Severus story. I like how you did the letters. most people make the letters seem like a joke opposed to something heartfelt. I can't wait to see your next work.
I KNEW Robert was Severus. I just KNEW it. South Africa, really? I love this so much. Thanks so much for writing this.
Well, I am not probably going to be original when I will tell that your story was very good.
As I wrote in shoutbox, you showed the other perspective of post-war Wizarding World. In fact, I think that noone else thought of the idea of Harry writing letters to his son. Also, Severus is not angsty, is so nice... Aw, I just love it.
Also, I am off to reading your other stories. Sounds like something for the boring weekend night.
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