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Title: Changing Time 30 Nov 2011 2:37 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    wow this was very well written and i enjoyed reading it though there was no dialogue still it was a great read!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Changing Time 29 Aug 2011 12:55 am
Reviewer: badgerlady (Signed) [Report This]
    Fun.

    Author's Response: =)
Title: Changing Time 03 Jul 2011 10:54 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I had better not borrow that pensieve - he has no need to see all the memories of a time that no longer exists
Title: Changing Time 02 Jul 2011 8:35 pm
Reviewer: PersianPianist (Signed) [Report This]
    ok that was rather easy. :) to think so many people waste s much of time trying to make everything alright. and there...it took only one chapter. LOL

    Author's Response: haha =)
Title: Changing Time 13 Jun 2011 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! I've read your other story and I thought I'd come check this one out. It is amazing! I love the way it works and the new future, and it makes total sense while still being mysterious. Excellent.

    Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Title: Changing Time 05 Jun 2011 7:42 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, interesting!

    Author's Response: Thanks! =)
Title: Changing Time 03 Jun 2011 2:58 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. What a wild ride. I really liked the flash-backs through a time we, as readers, knew wasn't real. And yet it was completely real and totally believable.

    Very well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Title: Changing Time 03 Jun 2011 1:49 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very nice Very Nice indeed!.

    Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Title: Changing Time 02 Jun 2011 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this. Shows a better view of changing times. Obviously the change over was only noticed by a highly organized mind. Would like to see what caused the time travel back, and how they picked that one point...distracting young Sev...as the start. And does Harry remember both time lines if he was the one to go back?

    Author's Response:

    Generally the person going back and doing the changing seems to remember both times; but in this case, I'm not so sure... Anyway, I quite like the idea of leaving it open-ended - with any time-travel situation, there will always be some questions that can't be answered.

    And you're right about the 'highly organized mind' =)

    Thanks for reading! 

Title: Changing Time 02 Jun 2011 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Evil Genus (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an amazing and interesting one-shot. I have to say it’s an interesting look at the ‘Butterfly Wings’ theory. The idea that Severus looking in another direction would have that drastic a change is amazing. If you decide to do another chapter or side story, I am curious as to what happened that led to Harry changing it all in that one second.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm that would be a good side-story to do. I must confess I, uh, haven't really thought about that too much... ^^

    Daresay I could come up with something.

    The idea that such a little thing can change such a lot is fascinating, I agree.

    Thanks for reading! 

Title: Changing Time 02 Jun 2011 9:30 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked this story! I liked this different approach to the time travel angle and the way it was written. I liked the way you wrote it from another person's point of view. I also love stories where Severus raises Harry. Awesome!! I hope you are considering writing a sequel!!! I would like to see what happens after Severus looks at his memories! :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! =)

    Not planning a sequel at this stage. More likely to be off-shoots and expansions from this story - eg the expanded version of the dragon incident, etc.

    Thanks for reading! 

Title: Changing Time 02 Jun 2011 7:32 pm
Reviewer: caecelia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fascinating premise, well-executed. I would have loved to see more interaction between the characters, but appreciate the vision you imparted. Sirius, Remus and Severus living together with Harry provided quite the image!

    The German phrase contains several errors.

    "Ich spucke auf das Gesicht DEINES VaterS"

    would be more correct. The second part of the sentence isn't idiomatic and also contains errors of gender and spelling. You may consider shortening it to:

    -- ER WAR eiN vollkommeneR Trottel!

    In any case, thanks for an interesting story.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I may at some stage do some extra little off-shoots, I'll see. Depends on coming up with the ideas haha.

    Thanks for the German tips, I used Google Translate so figured it wouldn't be all that accurate. =)


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