I loved how you ended it. I'm glad Sev isn't just forgiving everyone and that Harry does not expect him to just forgive everyone. That makes me happy. I love that Harry misinterprets that Severus is talking about Sirius instead of Lily. I look forward to your next story and know I have to catch up with Common Interests again.
I'm still curious what would have happened if Sev in your story would have hated or at least disliked quidditch. I look forward to re-reading this story in the future!
Great job!
| Title: Choices
| 28 Apr 2013 4:09 am
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| Reviewer: txn (Signed)
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I can't believe it's over! I never want it to end. I can't wait for the sequel. Thanks so much for all of your hard work and wonderful writing!
That was a good way to end this part. Lily did a lot of damage to Sev in their first lives and he will need time to get over the hurt and betrayal. It sounds like he will have a more realistic view of her this time around and if they do end up together as more than friends it will be as equals.
| Title: Choices
| 28 Apr 2013 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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Awesome story!
I like that you let Snape see that it's ok for him to be angry and hurt over what Lily did to him in his earlier life, and that it's ok to take his time to come to terms with it.
I Love that Lily seems to realize that she was not a good friend to Snape in her previous life, and that in their new lives, things are more equal between them - he is not some lesser being, "beneath" her notice.
oh no its over???? I loved this story... it was well done, well written and a good read...
| Title: Choices
| 27 Apr 2013 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: JWOJPfan (Anonymous)
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That was a brilliant and most enjoyable story! Thanks for sharing it. I look forward to the sequel, whenever you get around to writing it!
Nice!!! surprise, good job
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| 22 Apr 2013 11:33 pm
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous)
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Brilliant ending to an awesome and amazing story!!! I hope you write more in the future, you have a real talent for it!
Author's Response: Actually, there's one more chapter.
I was surprised. Hermione and Ron are going to have their hands full with triplets. I liked that they decided to make George the godfather to baby Fred. It seems like a really nice idea.
awwwww Three wow. They are not going to be getting any sleep for a year or 2. They are going to need a lot of help.
Love it! You are great at merging "the good times" with "the bad."
Just curious, because I was thinking back to earlier (I believe) in this story when Harry first took Sev flying, what do you think would have happened if Sev still continued to hate flying on a broom stick or naturally have a phobia of heights? Would Harry have left it alone? Been disappointed his "son" didn't share his love? Or what if Sev had refused to even ride the broom with Harry?
Going back a little further, what would have happened if Sev either refused to accept Harry and Ginny as guardians? Or had an attachment disorder where he couldn't connect with adults like normal kids can?
Thanks for listening to me babble!
Beth and George's wedding was nice. It was interesting that the bride wore blue rather than the Muggle white gown. Well, well, Sev is no longer Lily's doormat. Living with Harry and his family certainly gave his self-esteem a boost. I was glad that Lily apologized though it may take some convincing for Sev to get over all the bad memories. As to Ron and Hermione's baby, I vote for a little boy.
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