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Title: Chapter 25 03 Feb 2013 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    amazing!! the plot as well as the writing were wonderful. good job.
Title: Chapter 18 12 Mar 2012 6:58 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    " The three of them walked into the cold winter night. Harry breathed in the lovely fresh air, looked at the stars and suddenly regretted not knowing most of them." This should really be two sentences, with the verb ending for 'regret' changed in the second, as I have it.

    But aside from those two minor changes--what you have CONVEYED in this/these lines is what's special. You have captured Harry's heightened senses due to his (we all assume) impending death. He is treasuring what he and we figure to be his last moments, and therefore they are all the more precious.
Title: Chapter 15 12 Mar 2012 6:43 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    That Severus shared his overwhelming guilt over Lily's death saved Harry's mind in this chapter. Inspired--very well done.
Title: Chapter 25 28 Dec 2011 12:59 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific upbeat ending, made all the sweeter by the preceding angsty chapters! I was especially impressed with your interpretation of Snape throughout-- I suspect you managed to capture exactly how the man in black felt INSIDE, regardless of how he presented himself to the world. I hope he can finally seek and find some peace of mind, and yay for Harry and Hermione helping him out the way they did. Thanks for a very entertaining read!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Snape felt very black, no wonder after what DD and Voldemort put him through... and his own choices, etc. I am very happy you enjoyed it, it was fun to write!
Title: Chapter 25 25 Dec 2011 11:15 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    A happy ending? That was a surprise - a nice one though!

    Author's Response: Yes! Happy Christmas and thank you!
Title: Chapter 25 25 Dec 2011 7:07 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending! I liked reading it

    Author's Response: Thank you :) And for all the reviews, too. Merry Christmas!
Title: Chapter 25 25 Dec 2011 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh so wonderful! My favorite chapter I think. Can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews and have a great Christmas. It's marked complete now :D
Title: Chapter 24 24 Dec 2011 6:32 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Snape...Hope Harry gets through him soon!
Title: Chapter 23 23 Dec 2011 7:53 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    More serious Snape-Harry time, I like it!
Title: Chapter 22 22 Dec 2011 8:10 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Some Snape-Harry time huh?
    Can't wait to read more :D

    Author's Response: Yes, they need it.  That is what P&S is all about!
Title: Chapter 21 21 Dec 2011 10:23 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    So, Snape and Harry are both a bit lost now. Wonder what you're going to find for them to do.

    Author's Response:

    They are. No wonder, right They only had one purpose for years.

    Thanks for the review :D

Title: Chapter 19 21 Dec 2011 10:04 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I'm glad I'm a bit behind with reading this, so I don't have to wait for the next chapter!

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