| Title: Soul Searched
| 28 Dec 2012 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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"Severus had wondered how much the Dumbledore knew"
--Dumbledore is not a title, so the 'the' in front seems weird.
--And I shake my fist at you for the cliff-hanger. Because I like the story and want to know what happens next.
I'm a follower of your Digging for the Bones and found this one in the Recent update, I read the ones before this one and now I'm hooked :D Please keep up the awesome job!
Another lovely chapter. Perhaps we might have another one before Christmas?
I truly enjoyed this chapter, especially the bit about Snape coming to see Alice. Very kind indeed. Please update again soon!
I especially enjoyed this chapter. The dinner discussion was so interesting. I liked that Neville had decided to speak about Snape's part in the war. It was nice to have Alice in the story and her story about Snape visiting her in the hospital and what he said were poignant. I'll be interested in Severus' reaction to the dinner.
I found it surprising that Kreacher was aware of Severus' presence. Since house elves' powers weren't clearly defined, he may know more than he is letting on. Tim's conversation with Harry about that subject will be interesting.
I'm glad to hear you're okay!
I really enjoyed reading this, please update again soon!!
| Title: The White Tomb And The Black
| 02 Oct 2012 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wow... just.... WOW.
This was so, so, so heartrendingly beautiful. I'm going to stop here or I'm going to have to explain to my boss why I'm crying over the computer on my break.
Well done.
| Title: The White Tomb And The Black
| 25 Sep 2012 1:41 pm
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| Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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I was so excited to see a new update! Lovely chapter, as always.
Wonderful chapter. The scene at the tombs was really touching. Severus certainly learned some new things about Harry that day. I liked the use of the Tolkein verse on Snape's tomb. I always liked it and it was fitting.
Lovely interplay between Harry and Tim. And I know well the pain and worry of letting your semi-adult children make their own decisions... even when you know they're wrong. Great job. Love this whole series.
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