Reviews For A Little Boy To Care For
I have just one thing to say about your story:
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWW this is soooooooo cute.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: awww! Im actually at a lost for words! thank you so much! =)
Sorry if I made any mistakes in my review, but I'm not a Native speaker:)
Author's Response: I will. =) Its okay. You did fine. lol. English is my first language and I still have trouble with it! LOL. XD
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! =)
That could be a good idea. Maybe I should have Neville come in and help as well. ^.^ "Unca Nev!" lol.
I know how you feel because I'm a fairly new author too and I had just posted my very first Severitus story on this site and I was quite nervous!
But this was quite good and very cute. I wouldn't mind a following one shot, you know to see what the situation developed into. Keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^ I will. I'm going to write a sequel, but it will be more than a one-shot, from all the other reviews asking for more. =)
Very sweet and I would have loved to see more of what happens with Harry taking care of little Sev!
May I just suggest that you maybe split the story in two paragraphs. It would be easier to read.
With your permission, I could fix it for you.
Author's Response: sure! Thank you! I glad you like it. =)
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