awwwwwwwwwwwwww harry i just want to give him a hug.
it is hard healing from abuse it is indeed one step forward two back
i want to also hug sev as this is not all is fault.
well done with all the emotions!!!!
Things are getting interesting. Kudos.
Oh my, somehow I didn't expect to cry when I started to read this chapter! but that ending did it to me! congratulations, that takes skill!
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| Title: Chapter 14
| 23 Feb 2012 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting how you are depicting the emerging harry I like that he has issues of anger it makes it very gripping thank you
What is Dumbledore up to now?!?!?!
Great storyline, very well written. Good job!
Ron being Ron, I'm looking forward to see his reaction.
Great job!
Wow! Great start! I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.
Well done!
cool! I think harry's sensing their auras is that right?
Adding the Slytherin girls to Harry's group of friends is going to be interesting. I am also looking forward to learning more about Harry's ability to sense those he cares about.
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