This is an excellent start - hope you continue
I have a feeling Sev is going to say he doesn't care if he dies or not. I wonder if he has a death wish?
I so not liked that little cliffhanger. I want to see Severus' and even Dumbledores reaction to what Harry said. I can see Snapes eyebrow rise and Albus asking him to explain or something like that. I read this chapter and was like MORE MORE MORRRRRRE and then I forgot where I read this story was it here or Fanfiction and then I was upset that I forgot to follow it that I was like grrr and almost in tears but then I found it and squealed with joy and tracked it instantly. Can't wait for more update as soon as you can please!!!!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 29 Oct 2012 9:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic, thank you so much
amazing story!!! please update soon
Best time travel story I've ever had the pleasure of reading! Do continue please!
Oooh! This is great! More please? *pleading puppy eyes*
I think that my favorite part of this was when Harry told Dumbledore that he knew about the horcruxes, Gellert Grindewald and Albus' relationship with him, why the Headmaster wanted the deathly Hallows, and about Ariana.
I look forward to the next chapter. I'm already trying to envision Snape's reaction to Harry's last words in this chapter. :-)
Well done!
I just love the slight little twist to this story. Going back further in time is a wonderful idea.
Ah that was amazing! I really love this story, I was ecstatic when I got the email saying you updated :D Please continue I can't wait to see where you go with this!
I'm glad that Harry also told Dumbledore who he is. He will need both his and Snape's cooperation to change things. Severus seems right in character, snarky and sarcastic as ever.
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