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Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Turn 15 Apr 2012 9:20 am
Reviewer: DareToBeWeird (Signed) [Report This]
    I think your Draco is really good! Although, he has just lost his mother - who really cared about - and found out that his father doesn't really care about him, at all... I would think that, he being only twelve, might be a little more... unstable? Still really good - keep up the good work :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I think you're definitely right, and I did intend to go a LOT more into Draco's emotions and story when I first started this. I may actually re-write at some point, as a Draco fic, because that was the original idea. So yeah, if I do that then there would be a lot more processing/unstability on Draco's end. This story, as it is, seemed to need more simplification, so I left out a lot of the drama and processing that would be sure to happen on his end. But I definitely agree that things would not be this easy in real life. Thanks for picking up on that! And thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Turn 14 Apr 2012 11:18 pm
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally! Lol Jk:) great chapter. It was well worth the wait:)
Title: Chapter 8: Two Little Spies 13 Apr 2012 5:39 am
Reviewer: badgerlady (Signed) [Report This]
    This is well written, original, and touching. Please keep it up! (I never give a fic a 10 before it's finished.)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot, since this is my first fic. I hope to have it finished soon. Just a few more chapters to go! Hope you enjoy them!
Title: Chapter 8: Two Little Spies 09 Apr 2012 6:49 am
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course there is interest in a sequel...lol the story is wonderful!
Title: Chapter 8: Two Little Spies 07 Apr 2012 2:49 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is nice....like it.. very homey...

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8: Two Little Spies 07 Apr 2012 3:35 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course keep going with this story! You are an amazing writer, and I would hate to see this universe disappear! :o

    Author's Response: Aww shucks *blushes* Siriusly, though, thank you for the continued support! I'm having the time of my life writing and posting, knowing that people are reading and enjoying! I have lots of ideas already for the sequel, and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Title: Chapter 8: Two Little Spies 06 Apr 2012 11:54 pm
Reviewer: ParryHotter (Signed) [Report This]
    It's almost finished? No! Yes! Interest in a sequel - interest right here! Love it!!

    Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks so much for the vote of confidence! I already have the beginnings of the sequel plotted out, and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Title: Chapter 8: Two Little Spies 06 Apr 2012 1:53 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that's so cute.

    Oh, a sequel...yes, that would be lovely!

    I'm glad that Snape is seeing Harry for who he really is. Good chappie!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I was in the mood to cuddle, and since I couldn't, I decided to write a warm and fuzzy scene instead. Glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 2: Spies and Animagi 04 Apr 2012 6:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Dora and Sirius. Draco is very good as well as he trie to hold on to his Malfoy superiority. Thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks! I really liked the idea that there are some members of the Black family tree who aren't Death Eaters, and that they would really all stick together and take care of each other. Glad to hear you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 7: The Potions Master Returns 04 Apr 2012 3:34 pm
Reviewer: ParryHotter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh! He called him Harry! Yay!! *grins* I love your Sirius in this story - update soon! :D

    Author's Response: I'm hoping to have an update by the end of today. The next chapter is already written in my head :) Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 1: The Golden Beetle 04 Apr 2012 12:18 am
Reviewer: ParryHotter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love the whole last words bit and the way she saved them for Draco, how moving! Oh, and I really liked the "dragon my treasure" bit too! ;) love it!
Title: Chapter 7: The Potions Master Returns 03 Apr 2012 7:10 pm
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Great two chapters! Man, Dumbledore's spell really twisted them around! Lol!cant wait for more!:)

    Author's Response:

    *grins*

    More coming tomorrow, hopefully. Snape's going to be stuck on babysitting duty... :)


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